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Layla

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06/30/09
LostInEternity99

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06/07/09
PiggiesR4Me

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06/04/09
you big dummy

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04/08/09

hey miss, whats happenin?

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you big dummy

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04/08/09
ScottHallWithAPick

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03/01/09

I would say something rude but I'm not even in the mood.

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you big dummy

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02/21/09
s dubl

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02/17/09

stopping by to leave kudos.
aleine23

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02/07/09
ZachtheOgre

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02/02/09
Elpablo21

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02/02/09

idk it seems like it's already has enough in it for a guy to be interested in reading. I mean it already has all the topics that We would like...The only thing I see is the POV you right you're characters in (1st person on the girl and 3rd person on the dude)...I think if switched more guys would like it...but girls probably wouldnt lol...

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Elpablo21

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02/02/09

I'm sure you do...idk if you are trying to have your book to be more balanced or not. Might want to check some stories that are made for guys and see how other ppl have done it.

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Elpablo21

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02/02/09

Yeah I dont know really what to do either at this point lol...I'll sit back and see if something comes...I'm not trying to force it but not slack either

and trying to read your story from a male POV? hmmm...less emotions, more violence and sex lol..that might work lol

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Elpablo21

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02/02/09

I've been using a part where I'm stuck as an excuse for me *cough* delays...

The 2nd act is killing me right now

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Elpablo21

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02/02/09

It's begun to go away...finally! A little congestion but that's about it...I wont front..I've slacked this weekend on writing

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GreenEyes83

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01/28/09

I do not know... it is our mission to get to the bottom of this.

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GreenEyes83

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01/28/09

lol... yes, those rough edges are pretty nice.

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GreenEyes83

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01/28/09

Love the quote!
brokebacklance

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01/24/09

It's DE!!!!
you big dummy

988 Kudos

01/21/09

back on the road...

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