idk it seems like it's already has enough in it for a guy to be interested in reading. I mean it already has all the topics that We would like...The only
thing I see is the POV you right you're characters in (1st person on the girl and 3rd person on the dude)...I think if switched more guys would like
it...but girls probably wouldnt lol...
I'm sure you do...idk if you are trying to have your book to be more balanced or not. Might want to check some stories that are made for guys and see how
other ppl have done it.
Yeah I dont know really what to do either at this point lol...I'll sit back and see if something comes...I'm not trying to force it but not slack
either
and trying to read your story from a male POV? hmmm...less emotions, more violence and sex lol..that might work lol
sleepingbeauty777
10/05/09
sleepingbeauty777
09/15/09
sleepingbeauty777
08/06/09
Layla
07/22/09
LILBOOBEAR
07/19/09
Layla
07/10/09
Layla
06/30/09
LostInEternity99
06/07/09
PiggiesR4Me
06/04/09
you big dummy
Original comment »
04/08/09
you big dummy
04/08/09
ScottHallWithAPick
Original comment »
02/28/09
you big dummy
02/21/09
s dubl
02/17/09
aleine23
02/07/09
ZachtheOgre
02/02/09
Elpablo21
Original comment »
02/02/09
Elpablo21
Original comment »
02/02/09
Elpablo21
and trying to read your story from a male POV? hmmm...less emotions, more violence and sex lol..that might work lol
Original comment »
02/02/09
Elpablo21
The 2nd act is killing me right now
Original comment »
02/02/09